this is a business paper and this part is the action plan. please read and add neccesary ffeedback

1. What part(s) of the paper are the most effective?

2. What part(s) of the paper are the least effective?

3. What is the big idea?

4. List the major points of support that demonstrate the paper is evidence-based.

5.  Which sentences or paragraphs seem out of order, incompletely explained or otherwise in need of revision?

6.  Where are citations needed?